WRITTEN ENGLISH training THROUGH email // EZHILARASAN VENKATACHALAM
Friends, A lady sent an email asking my help
to improve her English in VERY POOR ENGLISH.
Please
see the SAMPLE REPLY email that I sent to her. Copy
given below (but name changed).
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READ,
RELISH, SHARE
படிக்க, சுவைக்க, பகிர..
Ezhilarasan
Venkatachalam.
ENGLISH
TRAINING THROUGH TAMIL
Salem, South India
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On
Sun, 29 Apr 2018 13:13:45 +0530 Thenmozhi Kumaresan <pqrstu@gmail.com>
wrote
>Hello
Sir,
Good
Noon!
Have
seen your video in youtube.
BETTER
ENGLISH / MY COMMENTS
===
I have seen a few videos of yours in youtube. They are nice, Sir.
As
mentioned reaching you for the same purpose.
BETTER ENGLISH / MY COMMENTS
===
This is your first contact with me. So you should not use the
phrase "as mentioned". If you had already told
me something, then you may use "as mentioned"
===
The phrase "for the same purpose"
displays an authoritative attitude. Avoid it with guru or seniors.
===Use
as many "Sir" or "Madam"
as possible.
===
In Tamil we can easily use suffix. "innga"
for respect. But there is no equivalent in English. Use "Sir" or it
will seems like "VADA PODA"
ENGLISH i.e. "bad manners"
English.
Vannga,
uttkarunga, saringa.
வாங்க, உட்காருங்க, சரிங்க..
I
would required to improve my grammar and effective email communication from
you.
BETTER
ENGLISH / MY COMMENTS
==
Sir, I need your help to improve my English grammar and written English skills
through email.
==="would
require" is correct not "would
required"
Note
: "I want water" is
harsh or poor English. "Can I have some water?" is
better and pleasing.
(If
you change a sentence as a question,
it becomes "pleasing"
automatically).
===
I need your help to improve my written English through email, Sir.
So
request you to revert back with further solution.
BETTER ENGLISH / MY COMMENTS
===
So I request you to revert.
===
revert means "come back"
so "revert back" is wrong.
===We
have not discussed any "problem"
so there is no need for "solution"
or "further solution"
***
Sir, I very badly need your support to improve my written English through
email.
Please
tell me what I should do. How I should pay the fees to you? Explain your terms and conditions, if any.
Thanking
you and eagerly waiting for your email.
Kindly
request you to reach my number 98123 12345 (dummy number) for further discussion if needed.
BETTER
ENGLISH / MY COMMENTS
=== Sir, please tell me your convenient time for
me to call you.
===
You are a student or learner
so telling GURU to call my number is VERY
BAD MANNERS.
Thanks
& Regards Thenmozhi Kumaresan (name changed)
===
Generally we use "regards"
in an official letter. For a guru or a senior faculty you should use more
"obedient" or "pleasing"
ending like...
1)
a person longing to become your student NAME
2)
a person longing to master my English with your help NAME
3)
a person who wants to improve her English and make you proud soon, NAME
Ms. Thenmozji Kumaresan, (name changed) I had already asked you to
send me Rs.xxx for an ENTRANCE TEST over phone. Anyway, I had considered you as
my daughter and send this SAMPLE email ... FREE OF
COST. It may help you to decide about my REMOTE
ENGLISH TRAINING method and quality
CAUTION
:
1)
I need to talk with a male member from your home (your dad or husband)
before we start.
More
details that I may need, I will tell later. Bye.
REPEAT
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படிக்க சுவைக்க பகிர
Ezhilarasan
Venkatachalam.
ENGLISH
TRAINING THROUGH TAMIL
Salem, South India.
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Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam Salem
Tamil Based English Trainer
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